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Past saturday was my schools festival, they rent lots of games and attractions, one of them was "el arca" this "arca" the ugly, old attraction was broken so there was an accidents, luckily no one was hurt. I also rode "el toro mecanico" (the bull that tries to take you down), this oily, metallic bull take me down so hard that I almost break an arm. But the worst part of the festival was that the old, wet soccer field was damaged so now I cannot play soccer anymore. In concusion I like a lot schools festivals but this one no so much, I hope it will be better next year.
Past saturday was my schools festival, they rent lots of games and attractions, one of them was "el arca" this "arca" the ugly, old attraction was broken so there was an accidents, luckily no one was hurt. I also rode "el toro mecanico" (the bull that tries to take you down), this oily, metallic bull take me down so hard that I almost break an arm. But the worst part of the festival was that the old, wet soccer field was damaged so now I cannot play soccer anymore. In concusion I like a lot schools festivals but this one no so much, I hope it will be better next year.